Salam today we have been learning about a good blog comment and being positive, thoughtful and helpful on fixing other people's commenting and making it better. First we added a greeting for the comment, then we improved their comment to make it better so the reader can understand what he is trying to write to him.
We gave the person a good comment and were positive helping him with his comment. We wrote what our favourite thing was and made a link of our blog so he can visit what our school has been doing on blog commenting.
Ahlan Taha,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your learning on your blog. I really like the way you've described the process and personalised the comment by sharing your favs to make a connection. Remember to get a buddy to read through comments to check for capital letters and simple things as it can really help a strong comment. I can see you are working hard on constructing the language to go alongside the digital learning object (DLO). Great job!
Blog you later...
James
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ReplyDeleteHi, there my name is Ahmed and I am a student in room 19 at Owairaka primary school. I really liked how you used google presentation. But have you thought to use punctuation. If you would like to see ,my learning, my blog is http://http://odsahmeds.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteHi, there my name is Sher and I am a student in room 19 at Owairaka primary school. I really liked how you used google presentation. But have you thought to use punctuation. If you would like to see ,my learning, my blog is http://odsshera.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteHi there I am a student from Waikowhai Primary School I really liked your blog it is very attractive.
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